Criticise me and encourage my writing - your input please?

It was very ominous and intriguing. I wanted to know more about the war and the characters, especially Julius. Not bad :)

I am ually deprived. Any advice?

most kids your age that are ually active have gotten stds you sound extremely mature for you age all the things you thinking are totally normal and you will find that Special someone and it will all be worth it

Veneration's of Ruins (comments?)?

Yeah! Where's Jacques Cousteau when we (of the Earth's populace) really need him? I like your poem and that you thought and cared to share it here. Thank you. It prompts me to invite and recommend that more people come visit www.SundanceChannel.com****Get with the whole scene again about consciousness-raising about what a really fragile eco-system we all live in. It just amazes me that God (some powerful force in the universe) allows what all He allows and well, just that I like your poem. It paints images in my mind. It inspires also. Do wish that all the nations of the Earth would take it more seriously that the oceans and land and etcetera can only tolerate so much "space travel", oil spills, pollution, or what not. Know what I mean?

MEN, I NEED TO KNOW how to be repulsive.?

lol just tell him in a nicely way you arent interested..or introduce him somebody else.. other than that idk..

Do men DIVIDE and CONQUER women? y, y not?

If I was "ruling the world" it would be a lot different than it is now. And don't try blaming women's vanity on men. That's just silly...

Can Dirk Nowitzki reach 20,000 points and overtake Larry Bird?

Putting aside the TITLE thing, Dirk has been playing so well for the past 10 years. Bird has 21,791 points, can he do it?

Rate my semi beat down deck for yugioh?

no offense dude but this deck is kinda sloppy... using equips like axe just doesnt cut it today especially competetively, the only staple equip is United We Stand, possibly Mage Power. If you say this deck is beat down then why all the high def monsters, gear golem/giant soldier of stone. Also as for your magic cards, discarding = bad, tribute to the doomed and lightning vortex should not be run in a deck unless discarding is a part of your strategy